Tuesday, December 7, 2010

Still walking.


In walking towards you,
the world withered away
shivering desires , precious posessions shrank

yearnings ,frictions,attachments...
melted away in air like camphor

somewhere, somehow...forgot the purpose , the attainment
only path remained
and i kept on walking ...step after step
chantings became mumbling
even rosary seemed heavy

just void...filled all blanks...

what do i tell others
which others
what is there to tell.....Void all....


3 comments:

  1. walking continuousy lead to unknown realms!
    wonderful!!!

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  2. life is like banquet hall... we come and join .. lights are on .. we dance and reciprocate... we share fond memories.. our smiles and tears ... the words of love are spoken .. the words of cynicism leave scars on dotted heart.. the hall br...eathes in all contradictions and convictions ...
    Finally we bid adieu .. now the eyes that shone are dim .. some are like wintry leaves .. finally depart .. some are nipped in the bud.. some are looking forward to bloom .. some are withered .. this goes on ...
    Now the lights are gone .. the hall is deserted ... and the world is lost in slumber ...

    and i kept on walking ...step after step

    chantings became mumbling

    even rosary seemed heavy

    just void...filled all blanks

    what do i tell others

    which others

    what is there to tell.....Void all...

    and the void envelopes us ... can we fill it ?
    manjula , a beautiful note...
    tumhari abhi tak ki poems mein best ..:))

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  3. सबसे पहले तो आप को इस नए रूप की बधाई .....अब जेसा की आप ने नाम रखा है इस बोल्ग का \कुछ दिल ने कहा
    हमें भी कुछ कहने का एक ठौर मिला दिल से कहने का .....ढेर सारी शुभ कमनाओं सहित ...बधाई आप को मंजुला जी !!!!!!!!!

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